Oh wow! She's gorgeous! And I'll give in-depth feedback a little later. I'm happy!

She was cute back in the day

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"Sure" is one of the most common answer’s you'll get from me...yup...

Back in the day? Can't you see she still is?

sure

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"Sure" is one of the most common answer’s you'll get from me...yup...

All time for the thick feedback now.

Panel 6: I really like this first panel. Her expression is cute, which matches the frame, but it's got it's own personality and your twist to it in terms of style. It's a very nice shot of her finished transformation, so much for her original slim shape huh. Glad I asked for something to convey that's she not genuinely happy to break a date and transform. Though I thought I wanted a smokey cloud (like Rachel did) I actually like the thunder cloud more since it fits her floati-ness. Like the panties and how they fit around her lower body with her legs and thighs forcing their way out. For the record everyone, I didn't want those to survive for censorship reasons, as Big said there's no nasty bits on her, I just figured she'd looked hot in them. Which she does. Only complaint is it seems like her left lower diamond is smaller than her right one, her left side closer to us but it's a minor error. And the 'ta-da' yellow marks are nice too for dramtic effect.

Panel 7: Really cute picture, I can't decide if her expression is the best part or her squeezed up body. The overall shape is really appealing with her lower half blowing up and her head area too. The expression matches her thoughts nicely, though her panties were the only thing of her attire that were specifically made to stretch, wore them under her clothing, they're not invincible. I also love the stretched panties look and all the folds. The lightning is also really good here too. It was here I noticed how her nozzle is colored. Half is red and the other blue. Interesting choice, at the end of panel five I noticed the same thing and expected her whole nozzle to be red. In the anime I think it was red for only one shot then blue for the rest (while inflated), but I like the half and half look. He closed fists and color themed sound effect are also very nice, cute feet too.

Panel 8: MMMM, she's got a very BigNasty styled expression. I think if there's any that are fan-servicey it'd be this one but I love it. Really I'd say this whole commission set is one be FS but I don't do shame. It's very dynamic and it's nice to have a rather action-esque picture in the set. The blue effect coming out of her nozzle is a nice color along with all the motion lines. The persepction is great too with how big her butt and well we can see her feet. We can tell just how over inflated her lower half is too, since we can see her red line around there, underwear looks great too, poor things. The expression is ever so priceless.

Panel 9: If anyone that's reading this has seen the episode then youd know that Pooko would be smothing Chibi-Sailor Moon right there. But since I'm too cheap I didn't pay to have her drawn in. Pooko's got another good expression and the sweat drop is cute too, clearly she's not enjoying today's work. It's kind of like she's trying to maintain and outward apperance of jolly goofy-ness but her annoyance is getting the better of her. Her position like that gives a great sense of how round and full she is. The little arms she has are cute. From that angle it looks kind of odd how her underwear is, one would probably think they'd slip off at any moment, not a complaint, I like this picture completly. Oh and the inverted coloring of the plop is nice.

Panel 10: Very cute, I wanted the idea of her tripping and falling on her face and rolling, this captures that. I considering asking for a thought bubble of 'damn it' but I wanted to keep text limited and figured that would be over doing. Another nice sense of Pooko's roundness and I wanted a back shot of her. I like how her clothing outlines her buttocks nicely. Another cute picture and I like the inverted coloring of the 'roll's.

Very cool commission and there's still two to go!
I wanted Pooko to dressed in duller and darker colors and more conservative clothing to transform and reveal she's brighter underneath all that. The commission is succeding that. Very happy here and no huge complaints

hehe, balloon girl goes flying!

Magnificent work on this one!

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Loonia Infinity
The Balloon Princess

"The sky's the limit, eh? We'll see about that ..."
**Slow and Deep Inhale can be heard ...**

And I'm afraid I didn't see what you did there with the date.

All eights.

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A born-again hooligan only to be king again.